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"Well….When I got my Cutie Mark..I was no bigger than you ponies…"
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"Come on Midnight! You can do it!" I heard the shouts from my two friends, Rainbow Dash and FlutterShy. I smiled a little and took off. My wings flapped quickly although I wasn't going anywhere. "Come on…" I mutter to myself. I got closer to the cloud ring. I smile and shoot through it. My two friends cheered. "Alright I did it!" Before I could really be happy to larger male pegasi shoot past me, causing me to spin and my wings stopped flapping. "AHH!" I screamed as I started to fall. Dash and FlutterShy flew down to help me. I smile at the two of them. "Thanks." I say. "That's what friends are for." The three of us returned to the cloud only to hear our teacher shout "Class over!" I groan. I was never going to earn my cutie mark or be a great flier. I awaited my parents and sat on my fathers back as he carried me home.
That same night I stared out of the window of my bedroom, the star filled night sky above my head. It was a Crescent moon night. "Please..Princess Luna…Let me earn my cutie mark soon." I prayed quietly to my idol. "All of my friends have one…" I sigh heavily and continued to look out the window. I decide to go for a flight and open up my window, quietly sipping out before my parents noticed. I smile as I flew alone under the stars and moon when a loud clap of thunder made me tense up. It had started to rain and I couldn't see a thing. I tried to look for my way back home but I couldn't. My wings started to grow numb and before I knew it, I was falling out of the sky. I couldn't see anything above or under me so I had no idea how close the ground was. My eyes closed and I put my body in the form of a nose dive. My speed picked up and I heard lightning crack and surround my body. Just before I hit the ground my wings opened back up and I swooped back into the sky. With a smile on my face I swerved through the clouds, the lightning still circling my body.
When I finally made my way back home I shook myself dry, my mane filled with static. I was about to curl into my bed when I passed by my mirror. I noticed something on my flank. I squealed in delight. I had earned my cutie mark! It was a crescent moon with a bolt of lightning through it. My special talent was night flying!
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"And from that day on I've been a pony of the night..Well daytime too but I'm awesomer at night...Heh."
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"Come on Midnight! You can do it!" I heard the shouts from my two friends, Rainbow Dash and FlutterShy. I smiled a little and took off. My wings flapped quickly although I wasn't going anywhere. "Come on…" I mutter to myself. I got closer to the cloud ring. I smile and shoot through it. My two friends cheered. "Alright I did it!" Before I could really be happy to larger male pegasi shoot past me, causing me to spin and my wings stopped flapping. "AHH!" I screamed as I started to fall. Dash and FlutterShy flew down to help me. I smile at the two of them. "Thanks." I say. "That's what friends are for." The three of us returned to the cloud only to hear our teacher shout "Class over!" I groan. I was never going to earn my cutie mark or be a great flier. I awaited my parents and sat on my fathers back as he carried me home.
That same night I stared out of the window of my bedroom, the star filled night sky above my head. It was a Crescent moon night. "Please..Princess Luna…Let me earn my cutie mark soon." I prayed quietly to my idol. "All of my friends have one…" I sigh heavily and continued to look out the window. I decide to go for a flight and open up my window, quietly sipping out before my parents noticed. I smile as I flew alone under the stars and moon when a loud clap of thunder made me tense up. It had started to rain and I couldn't see a thing. I tried to look for my way back home but I couldn't. My wings started to grow numb and before I knew it, I was falling out of the sky. I couldn't see anything above or under me so I had no idea how close the ground was. My eyes closed and I put my body in the form of a nose dive. My speed picked up and I heard lightning crack and surround my body. Just before I hit the ground my wings opened back up and I swooped back into the sky. With a smile on my face I swerved through the clouds, the lightning still circling my body.
When I finally made my way back home I shook myself dry, my mane filled with static. I was about to curl into my bed when I passed by my mirror. I noticed something on my flank. I squealed in delight. I had earned my cutie mark! It was a crescent moon with a bolt of lightning through it. My special talent was night flying!
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"And from that day on I've been a pony of the night..Well daytime too but I'm awesomer at night...Heh."
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The Story of Midnight Twinkle's cutie mark! I have come up with names for her parents! SnowSky (Mother) And ThunderStrike (Father)
Midnight Twinkle, SnowSky, and ThunderStrike (c) Me
Fluttershy RainbowDash and Luna (c) and Hasbro
also if anypony would like to come up with the design for Midnight's parents that'd be awesome and I'd love to work with you on that!
Midnight Twinkle, SnowSky, and ThunderStrike (c) Me
Fluttershy RainbowDash and Luna (c) and Hasbro
also if anypony would like to come up with the design for Midnight's parents that'd be awesome and I'd love to work with you on that!
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I see this in my messages, and find myself wondering: "I didn't make a story about Midnight's cutie mark..."
Then I realize it's another OC entirely! (My main OC is named Midnight Blade.) What a strange coincidence...
Either way, good short story!
Then I realize it's another OC entirely! (My main OC is named Midnight Blade.) What a strange coincidence...
Either way, good short story!